tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post6659321171866811904..comments2023-09-16T12:03:11.610-04:00Comments on HEIDI RUBY MILLER: SFFS: Snippet from GREENSHIFT #4Heidi Ruby Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02190166838730021237noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-88958189775521042722012-01-16T03:09:15.910-05:002012-01-16T03:09:15.910-05:00I'm feeling the tension as I wait for the snip...I'm feeling the tension as I wait for the sniping to finish and the shooting to start!Pippa Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15146591827060731958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-43945045667469373122012-01-15T08:40:13.357-05:002012-01-15T08:40:13.357-05:00Thanks for stopping by, everyone!
Writing dialog ...Thanks for stopping by, everyone!<br /><br />Writing dialog is one of my favorite parts of a story.Heidi Ruby Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02190166838730021237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-21829623359883940402012-01-14T22:09:34.672-05:002012-01-14T22:09:34.672-05:00Is a fight about to break out? Great conflict in d...Is a fight about to break out? Great conflict in dialogue.Diane Dooleyhttp://dianedooley.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-91158970087858899132012-01-14T16:31:11.648-05:002012-01-14T16:31:11.648-05:00Lots of conflict, sounds like someone could get hu...Lots of conflict, sounds like someone could get hurt!Melisse Aireshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01478569639424075550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-69720758714438628852012-01-14T12:20:04.041-05:002012-01-14T12:20:04.041-05:00Great setup! Leaves me wanting more.Great setup! Leaves me wanting more.Patrick Stutzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06701695102224164322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-90564560651805016912012-01-14T11:48:21.583-05:002012-01-14T11:48:21.583-05:00I love this! I love that your characters aren'...I love this! I love that your characters aren't infallible and indestructible. I want MORE!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-50652176016661110572012-01-14T11:45:03.503-05:002012-01-14T11:45:03.503-05:00Nice dig there ...Nice dig there ...LaurelCKrieglerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874628866547175842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-35133234510403749392012-01-14T10:16:42.088-05:002012-01-14T10:16:42.088-05:00Oh, love this! A nice set up for some interesting ...Oh, love this! A nice set up for some interesting stuff to come. Can't wait to dig into Ambassadora so I'll "know" these people...TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-20027189975749300942012-01-14T08:16:21.675-05:002012-01-14T08:16:21.675-05:00hmuah ha xD I love snappy dialogue. Nice snippet!hmuah ha xD I love snappy dialogue. Nice snippet!nothankyouhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10400977533757322219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-42090521998922545402012-01-14T05:36:04.131-05:002012-01-14T05:36:04.131-05:00Nice conflict here.Nice conflict here.Misa Buckleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16571385607998323197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-16710395556151271962012-01-13T23:50:37.819-05:002012-01-13T23:50:37.819-05:00Great little snippet...enjoyed the character inter...Great little snippet...enjoyed the character interaction. Definitely sets the stage for some conflict later.T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31505433.post-88567095679614165922012-01-13T22:37:44.589-05:002012-01-13T22:37:44.589-05:00I see you cheated and took an early peek at my sni...I see you cheated and took an early peek at my snippet! (so I thought I'd cheat too and do the same).<br /><br />Sparks are continuing to fly, I see (I'm very frustrated, only getting to read this in 10 sentence tidbits, btw). I'm getting the strong impression that someone's making a big mistake antagonizing David. *sigh* I guess I'll have to wait till next week to find out.Cary Caffreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497153478198948932noreply@blogger.com